In class we took turns analyzing each of our peers images and made notes of what we thought works and what does not.
Pertaining to my image the negatives i recieved 9/10 times was that the "title" was illegible. I wasn't aware that i had a title. It works though i guess. Bigote duro frio is "Cold hard mustache" in spanish. It was just something i wanted to me lost in the background but i guess i made it stand out too much. So i decided to make it my title. I also decided to work on the rest of the composition as well. Here is what i have so far:
Thanks
Matthew
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