*Read as kindle ebook*
A let down compared to Jake's Wake. At 275 pages there is more than enough room to grow with the great concepts in this piece. I felt lost in a few spots. Revisions need to be done with this. This is going to be pressed by Leisure Fiction as a mass paperback in the middle of this new year. Hopefully they will fix and expand and EXPLAIN half of the people/vehicles/places that appear out of nowhere and act as if they have been already mentioned. Really good otherwise. Just needs a few more drafts.
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